Writing ネイティヴの文章より

課題のイントロの部分ですけどね、一見分かりやすそうですが、何を言いたいのかイマイチ分かりません。ネイティヴでもこんなもんだよ、と分かってもらえれば。まあ、これくらい書ければ7.0に行くんじゃないですか？というより、これより簡単に書いてもらいたい。その方が絶対に高得点が取れると思うんだけど？この人達にはもちろん Pass (50点以上）をあげましたよ。Credit (65~74点）くらいはあげられるかなぁ。でもDistinction (75～84点）は無理。High Distinction （85点以上：トップ5%）なんて、もっと無理。 あ、この課題に関しては「I」（第一人称）を使って書くように、との指定つきです。「Reflective Essay」なので。

ステイシー

I was involved in a group assignment to present a topic to the class, group work was involved to research and prepare the topic. However, as within any group there were complications in this process.　... Throughout this reflective essay I will be discussing how group cohesion and feeling of empowerment effects group effectiveness and the process from preparing the presentation, to initiating it.

ケイシー

This paper will examine the connunication between group members to prepare, presented and responded of my group assignment. As my role in the group was a presenter I will evaluate the presentation and relate this back to supporting theories.

ブレンダン

This is a report on the presentation on networking and mentoring, which was carried out by out group in week nine. My role in the group work was to present the finished project, this is my reflection of the events of that presentation and the group work leading up to the presentation, as well as a reflection on the feedback received.